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Open Poetry #23

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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-12-04 10:50 AM

Nobody really understands me
or whats going through my head
nobody really knows me
or about the way I live my life

and I (aye aye)
won't ever let you in
on my secrets
my hidden messages

My thoughts are runnin'
right outta my head, and out the door
and I (aye aye)
may be a little crazy

but,
nobody stands around me
or washes their hands
nobody nobody nobody
believes like me

and I (aye aye)
don't think about you
Its a mystery
are you mistaken

because I (aye aye) don't agree

---This is a song I wrote last night--

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2002-12-04 03:37 PM

i like this a lot. seems you may be feelin the same thing i'm feelin these days...

the I (aye aye)'s make me wanna put a reggae beat on it...
though i dont know if that's what you had in mind.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-16 04:22 AM

I thought of a pirate first...a great song it seems to be.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2002-12-16 04:45 PM

trueness. Who are the ones that TRULY know you? And further yet, who are the ones that TRULY TRULY know you? Take it far enough, and you'll find that nobody understands you. Not REALLY, anyway.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2003-07-13 03:32 AM

and do I truly even know?

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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