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whiskey
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0 posted 2002-12-04 10:13 AM


Fallen

You Came to me
Like a dream in the night
Captavating
My thoughts
Holding me
Within

Engulfed
By visions of you
Dancing
Across my mind
Hungry
For more of you

Each second
Spent with you
My love grows
Deeper, Stronger
Entangling
My Love with yours

How I long
For you
To be in your arms
You Holding me
Your Breath
Upon my skin

I want to
Feel you in body
As I do in soul
To meld
Two into One

© Copyright 2002 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 2002-12-04 10:22 AM


Steamed need and sultry write. Enjoyed
Gothkitty
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2 posted 2002-12-04 10:35 AM


Very romantic sensual I know whom ever this is written for will love it
fairydustwing
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since 2002-12-02
Posts 17
U.K., London
3 posted 2002-12-04 11:42 AM


Very sexy and passionate! that goes for your poem too .  No seriously, I really enjoyed it.  All the best, fairydustwing.
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2002-12-04 11:52 AM


sensual longing well expressed.... may you find what you seek and comfort with yourself above all...
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-04 03:42 PM


I want to
Feel you in body
As I do in soul
To meld
Two into One


Beautifully romantic and passionate.

enjoyed


Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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6 posted 2002-12-04 06:34 PM


To meld
Two into One


Exactly what love SHOULD be, total and complete surrender.

Thank you

Raph

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7 posted 2002-12-04 07:35 PM


Is this poem about SEX?? I thought it was.. Thats good.. i like sex.. YAYYY!!!!
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