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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-11-03 05:07 PM

I've fallen
No I really don't want to get up
This time
My heart has plummeted
Within the great divine
I can't believe it
No I really don't want to understand
But here I am smiling
Holding your hand
I swear it used to feel
Like a thousand lifetimes have gone past
Since I met you last
But here we are back again
Falling back in love
You were my first way before we were
Ever put on this earth
I try not to believe in destiny
Anymore, only to find my sanity
Packing its bags
On its way out that door
But I can't seem to help it
When we talk till four
I've fallen
And this time I'm sure
That this is for real
And I never have to
Sweep up the pain
That I used to let lie
Carelessly upon my bedroom floor
And for once
I can finally admit
That my heart looks good in love...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (11-03-2002 05:08 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-11-03 05:30 PM

This is so very lovely, Kristen...
I hope its a true story

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2002-11-03 07:02 PM

This was surperb...I really, really liked the way you put it together...

jwesley

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-03 08:01 PM

Yay!!! Oh Kristen, I too hope this story is true, sweet friend, you deserve true happiness always and may the beauty of love always bring sparkles to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-11-03 09:13 PM

"I try not to believe in destiny
Anymore, only to find my sanity
Packing its bags
On its way out that door"
Outstanding! Thanks for sharing this one.

In sanity, Kacy.

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-11-04 06:24 AM

Brilliantly done Ceinwyn. Every one should fall like this - at least once
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-12-04 04:17 AM

Enjoyed...James

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2002-12-04 06:45 AM

its nice to fall once in a while, isnt it?
and just take it for the moment, without looking for expectations other than what it is at the time, unfortunately, thats the problem, otherwise there wouldnt be so much
poetry of loves anxst.

but this was nice and sweet to read

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2002-12-04 05:35 PM

Ceinwyn, I see he's been keeping you busy! I've missed you! Sounds like you don't need a helping hand to get back up! The fall appears to be doing wondrous things for you! tehe

This fall was so uplifting!*!

~ warm, happy hugs
Linda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-12-04 07:41 PM

Ah sweet love...this is SO nice to read..
love the feelings here...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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