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The Be of Not to Be
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The Be of Not to Be |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Be of Not to Be I am the knight of nights It’s fantasy and flights The rearrange of strange Tumble weed of the range. Star dust my sward of choice The wind my ward of voice And love me love me not Is the pluck of my plot? Osmotic in minds find Exotic to the blind Philosophic in stay And then, I’m away. Quick silver to the clutch Evasive to the touch Filled with mists lonely sigh Lost to the real of eye. I am a dream you see The be of not to be. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Ahhhh, a mystical kind of trippy to be or not to be--enjoyed "be"-ing there  [This message has been edited by Sandpiper (12-04-2002 07:52 AM).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
An interesting and enjoyable read. I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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cherrylips Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 51UK |
To be or not to be... well I would say that this is an unsual and interesting poem . A refreshing change. dx |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, dreams are special things that must always be cherished and to hold them like a child is a true blessing! (big hugggsssssss) This is special, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You are the knight of nights, ever taking us away to dream a little while. So nice to get away for a moment in time. Like this a great deal. Warm, regards. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper Glad you enjoyed, have a good one. EagleOne Glad you flew over to read. cherrylips Thanks for the read and nice reply. Noah, Good morning. Pat Top of the morning and thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The rearrange of strange Tumble weed of the range. Star dust my sward of choice The wind my ward of voice And love me love me not Is the pluck of my plot? Osmotic in minds find Exotic to the blind Philosophic in stay And then, I'm away. Quick silver to the clutch Evasive to the touch =============================== COULD THIS POEM BE ANY COOLER???? what a delight of word play, rhyme banter and clever couplets. YOU are too cool for school  The rearrange of strange Star dust my sward of choice The wind my ward of voice And love me love me not Is the pluck of my plot? Aint no question of to be or not to be... YOURE A POET and we all KNOW IT *winkiewinkie*  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Everything that JM said and more! Beautiful post this ayem m'friend. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Then this knight will ride again Holding a dragons mane. Watch for this chargings prim He calls himself Randy of Whim. WWRS  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... Star dust my sward of choice The wind my ward of voice And love me love me not Is the pluck of my plot? ...' I love this stanza and found the whole poem somewhat different that what you normally write. It was great and I enjoyed it so much. Huggles to you, Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Top of the morning beautiful, hugs back. Marti, Thanks for the nice comment and huggles back |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is great I really liked this one alot, very different. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
whiskey It came from a little imbibing. LOL thank you. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Dreams may not be transparent, but seldom is this knight-errant. Enjoyed |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
To be a bee or not to be? "B" stands for Balladeer He always tortures me. There are some things About them "Bees" That few people know Here's about "Bees" That Toerag Sees Here's how the story goes: The bee is such a busy soul, He has no time for birth control That is why in times like these There are so many "Son's of "B's" |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
This is great very imaginative |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Truly enjoyed the weaving of sounds and meanings. A fascinating piece, for sure! Favorite line..."Quicksilver of the clutch" Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells A delightful reply, thank you. Toe, That is worth a setup at any bar. LOL Gothkitty A wile is a wile in any style, thank you. VAS, Fascinating is good, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., you have intrigued me even more.... Your wit and whimsy do delight You are the knight to fill my night This dream of you is so much fun --Oh, Isabelle's here--I've gotta run!!!! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I'll see what I can do. LOL thank you. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
This is so charming.... I really enjoyed reading these words. I promise I had not seen it before I posted mine, but it sure goes well with it. I almost called it Night of Knights *how strange* I guess our mind set was simular today ~Salty |
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Cathie Arnold Junior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 18SC |
Very nice piece of work you have here. Thank you for sharing it. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Mistical write, Sy...write on knight...stardust is an excellent choice...you don't have to mow it.. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (12-04-2002 12:46 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Salty I noticed it too, strange and thank you. Cathie, Thank you for the read and reply. scorpio Thank you always enjoy your comment. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, I love dreams. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl I do too, thanks for the read. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is fantastic, an excellent write Seymour. adding to my library. Maree |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maree, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very creative Seymour...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you for the stop by James. |
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