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Dreaming or Awake
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Dreaming or Awake |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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The breeze blew across my skin I felt it tickle my legs It was hot that day The sun shone intense I looked up from my book Across the grass amongst the trees A green field gently swaying I heard a bird flutter its wings Jumped, turned to see Nothing only blue sky I lay back on my blanket Began to read once again A flash of colour Out the corner of my eye I saw Darting red from tree to tree Is something there I scream No answer returns with the wind Seconds later I hear it Your voice saying Wake up my sleepy girl I am flying above trees, field In an instance I awake Opening my eyes I see your face toward mine Lips kissing my head Good morning baby I hear you say It was all a dream my mind tells me The breeze blew across my skin It was hot that day [This message has been edited by whiskey (12-04-2002 12:11 AM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love the tickle of breeze over my skin... this was very nice. Maree  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, it sounded like a REALLY nice dream......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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PoeticJustice Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 44AK, USA |
Could the end "it was very hot that day" mean that the dream was going to come true? I think so |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the breeze flies by with a tap on your heart, i know this feeling, like the inter- connectedness between 2 people i love, touching through the spiritual world, well something like this, but i liked this very much, |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Hmmmmm..I just love when a dream visits on warm breeze--lovely! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You sitting there, I could see: "a green field gently swaying" I like this a lot. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
IT was hot that day probably had alot to do with what you were dreaming...right? *S* WEll I enjoyed the breeze myself ~Salty |
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