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Fire? or something else?
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Fire? or something else? |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Desperate embers, the glow of a lifetime such a pretty sight, more beautifull than I could have imagined Grew larger still, Something that wanted anything. Something that wanted everything. That took over. So much destruction. Greed, heat like I could never imagine nothing stood in its way. I wanted to put it out, but what's one girl going to do? Strange to say. It is not fire I am talking about Never be normal! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Liz, you write with much depth...and the riddle of this could be taken in several thoughts...I would guess greed or lust for something would certainly qualify... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love the way you conveyed something as "such a pretty sight, more beautifull than I could have imagined" yet it took over and you wanted to destroy it. You wrote it just brilliantly! keep it up  Always, GG -And so it was that time stood still- |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Deep thoughts and great power in these words. I'm off to look for more of your work. raph |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Liz! Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, you awlays speak of your feelings with so much depth, sweet friend, and I hope this adversity is weathered soon and a monsoon of hope comes to wash it all away! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wind The embers of emotion can glow hot. enjoyed. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
So far, you have come up with wonderfull ideas, yet no one has got the one that matches perfectly. I won't ruin it though. Thank you all. Never be normal! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Its beginning to sound alot like christmas in my house with each read. Well right or wrong I'll love it however its interpreted |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wind Enjoyed this so much...perhaps it's love, or time. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you continue to amaze me |
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