Open Poetry #23 |
Curiously In Love |
Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Are you looking up Into the same night sky & hoping I'm thinking of you On a sunny day Do you sometimes pray That what you're feeling I'm feeling it too? Alone or in a crowd Are you incomplete somehow Longing to be with me? 'cause I love you... Do you feel exposed From your head to your toes When we're standing face to face? Do you think I'd know How bad it would hurt you so If someone were to take your place? But shouldn't you know better? If it were up to me We'd never, ever part 'cause I love you.... True, As true as love could be I need you, I hope that you need me I know where love begins & you are my friend So look deep in your heart you might see, that you love me too... Sunkissed |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
And well he should.....and should voice it. Welcome |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Great first post....welcome to passions...and the next time I look up into the night's heavens..I'll think of you... |
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Cathie Arnold Junior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 18SC |
This is a very nice poem, from beginning to end. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have a suspicion that he knows this...and if he does not....I am sure that this poem will tell him what's happenin'!!! Welcome to Passions...enjoy yourself... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! And a very nice entrance you have made here today! I look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, A sun-sister...Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a very Special Greeting! Karilea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...James |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow there wasn't a single line in there I didn't like, you are a very good writer. I'll be looking for more of yours. WinterWren |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions. Very nice first post. Enjoy your time here and get to know us as we grow to know you. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Honest and from the heart, lovely--welcome. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions! Lovely first post. Enjoy yourself here. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous heartfelt debut, sweet friend, may this friendship in your golden heart blossom and be filled with the most happiest love of all! God Bless You, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunkissed, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thanks all for the warm welcome. I hope to read as many of you as I can in the near future. Sunkissed |
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