Open Poetry #23 |
Dipping |
Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Dipping Husk me with your voice Like summer corn, tassle set Butter melts over You only thought summer was gone Come December, relish June [This message has been edited by Soleil Noir (12-03-2002 09:46 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I do relish Junes warmth today... or is that desire... nicely done... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
After the shuckin' pops the corn. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh Dang!!... this is so good! Great to see you here today! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil Yes, a husky voice like summer corn, sounds so good! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Soleil, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, there are remnants of every seasons harvests everywhere, guess we all have that Perspherone in our blood! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Now I'm hungry! (and cold... I most definitely relish June!) This is a cool (no pun) vignette. Of the best kind. C ps - tassle set, which is really cool, might work better as tassle-set |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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