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Open Poetry #23

Live for the Moment

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-03 03:21 PM

I can feel it pouring out of them
I can feel it in their smiles
It’s so pure and un-spoiled

Like so many memories of my own
The sort of feeling
That is warm even when it’s freezing outside

No fear of anything real
Only afraid of the tears that follow a mistake
But living for the moment

So mistakes have no significance
Just stay oblivious
And be the way you’re meant to be, happy.

Rosie Mitchell

[This message has been edited by rm711 (12-03-2002 04:43 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-12-03 04:23 PM

Since you are asking for suggestions, may I suggest "Living for the Moment" as a title. When I read that line in your poem it struck me as a possible choice--and they are your own words!

I enjoyed this poem and the sentiments expressed.

Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-03-2002 08:08 PM).]

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA