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Open Poetry #23

Cold

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-03 12:51 PM

I’m feeling scared
And nobodies there
Each sound of the wind
I hope it’s someone
Anyone that cares

I’ve got a sinking feeling
That no-one is ever gonna come
Even if they could find me
Maybe they don’t want to
Perhaps this is my destiny

Every time I saw you
I’d hang onto every word you said
Just incase you said something
That could mean anything to me
Or that I could mean anything to you

If I am destined to hide in this shadow
I will surrender to the pain and the cold
Watch me suffer in this place
And if you care
Take it all away.

Rosie Mitchell

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

1 posted 2002-12-03 02:18 PM

Play. I suggest building a castle in the sand then gradually warm up to watering thy dark forest. I like this so much because it seemed difficult finding my way out of some kind of forgotten castle. Thank you.

etoodog

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2002-12-04 06:00 PM

Dang! You are so good! I stand humbled in the shadow of your greatness. *bows*

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

3 posted 2002-12-05 10:39 AM

Well thankyou very much but I really ain't nething special, I'm just me...
The thing about the castle confused me but cool neway thankyou 4 reading

Rosie Mitchell

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