Open Poetry #23 |
Cross Bows |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I caught my reflection sideways glancing at the sightof you. I stood very still holding my breath waiting patiently. Anticipation sweating from my brow. You had me lined up ready to make the kill. But even cross bows miss when the arrow isn't straight or true. You missed me by a mile, didn't you? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Cute and clever, enjoyed. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
This one makes me smile....BIG TIME!!! ~Salty |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*Sigh* and Salty, thanks. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Makes me think of a religious debate... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mark, LOL at that one. But it's funny you say that, because I wondered if someone might expect a poem about crosses when reading the title. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, very clever and wise |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Ahhhh, your words hit, center target!! Enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Perfect! I love it. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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fairydustwing Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 17U.K., London |
This made me laugh, I've SO had moments like that before, I guess everyone has which makes it wonderful to relate to. clever, real, I liked it. All the best, fairydustwing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Shadows, Thanks! Sandpiper, thank you for your reply. Pat, glad you liked. fairydustwing, Happy to help you laugh today. |
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