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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-12-03 12:45 PM





The sunset has faded once more,
Gone are its radiant hues
That warmed the end of my day.
The darkness of night envelopes me.
The air is still,
the quietness of evening deafening.

I sit and ponder the past and question the future.
Memories…. thoughts, flooding my mind.
Just like a pond when a stone is cast upon it,
So are the rippling effects
borne by my heart and soul.

The innocence of a child’s daydreams
Now are transformed into a woman’s world of reality.
For so long I guarded my thoughts and feelings
Keeping them locked behind closed doors,
Allowing no one in.

You entered my world and became part of it.
I learned to trust someone as would a child,
And in doing so…
I gave you the mystical key
That unlocked the private depths of my soul…
Secured in a vault for so long.

Fantasies became reality,
Untapped passions unbridled.
A tenderness and gentleness I’d never known
You warmed and comforted me….
Made me believe once again
Finally I knew what it meant to be a woman.

With the dawn and twilight of each new day
I am reminded of the warmth,
The unique closeness we share.
The stars of evening, sparkling like jewels,
Represent the memories I cherish.
The friendship and unique intimacy remains,
its future undaunted.
Love remains....
Moments we cherish…….

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-12-03 12:51 PM


Cher,
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I sit and ponder the past and question the future.
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What an excellent investment of time. Because all that follows is so wonderful. Bless you dear lady and thank you for sharing your rippling thoughts.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-12-03 06:12 PM


One of my favorites...well written...James
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-03 06:17 PM


Cher, I read your words silently then went back and whispered them. They were not only comforting to me, but I was filled with joy for you. You speak as a woman who has found true love...

~ May your love continue to blossom and grow, dear friend!

Linda

GG
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Lost in thought
4 posted 2002-12-03 06:47 PM


I just love the way you described everything, it was amazing.
I sincerely loved it! ..you so well explained the transforming of a lonely and solaced world into one of love where beauty immerses and you can see and feel again.
keep it up

Always, GG

-And so it was that time stood still-

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
5 posted 2002-12-03 06:53 PM


I suppose the pain and agony of love lost..then lonely nights where hope is lost and then rebirth of love has enabled me to value love and cherish it and write about all the aspects. I am only newly in love once again in the last few months.
Thanks for commenting on this. I had doubts that I was rambling my own thoughts.
aloha and hugs to you all, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Sandpiper
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6 posted 2002-12-03 07:26 PM


Sounds as though you've found a "forever" treasure--lovely!
garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-12-03 07:58 PM


Cheryl, I do believe that you've found a true, lasting love.
You wrote so many thoughts similar to the way I feel about my
Love. Doesn't it feel good, dear friend?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-12-03 08:50 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Cheryl, you sound so happy in these words, sweet friend, I'm happy you're in love again and I wish this time for this happiness to remain true forever and for love to always sing to you! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart,s weet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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