Open Poetry #23 |
He Remembers So Much About Her |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * In his mind he stores a picture On the days when she's not near He can bring her face to mind And hear her voice so very clear He remembers so much about her Like her skin so soft and fair And the way she closed her eyes As he ran his fingers through her hair He imagines the feel of her body And the warmth of her tender touch Those three words had eluded him But he loved her so very much Such a love they share so special In their love they now rejoice 'tho their hearts are far in distance They still share the same voice I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (12-02-2002 08:12 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this love poem so deeply touched my heart, sweet friend, I can relate to these feelings so well as I love my Joanna so much and dream so much to finally hug her and kiss her and make her happy forever as I can feel her touches and kisses in my dreams! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true master at romance, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely done SueT, and your graphics add tremendously to your poetry... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Just beautiful and so graphicly romantic and touching.. You added your special magic to this wonderfully done poem. aloha and warm hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Sue! Such a romantic picture and poem. This is such a beautiful expression of the love that we carry in our hearts and sustains us when we are apart from our loved one(s). Enjoyed the read! Shenachie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful work Sue! I too love the graphics, they truly enhance the mood of your write! |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I like counting on you to have a demystified view of romance. etoodog |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sue...you do write romance so well. And your pics add to them perfectly. Well done sweet poetess. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautifully romantic...James |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: I enjoyed this poem and the picture too. Lovely sentiments expressed in it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sue, I don't know how I missed this one. It's beautiful, as always. The picture just sets it off, too. You are so good at writing these love poems, lady. Thank you for sharing them with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful! |
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