Open Poetry #23 |
Star sparkle eyes |
angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Star sparkle eyes . High above me, Bright spots of beauty, The grass my mattress, All around is dark, But bright spots above, An amazing wielding arc . At one with the world, One with the cool hard earth, Sweet whisperings of life, Staring at the sky, I find that I can lose myself, I feel like I can fly . Swirling in my mind, A dusting of bright points, More and more I see, Windows to a better place, They sparkle like your eyes, I cannot shake your face . You’re part of this world, I can’t lose you, I wish you lay beside me, In this blanket the world has made, Looking out together, For this beauty I have paid . Written by Tom Baker .© 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Tom, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may peace always fill your heart and sing to you with angelic grace! (big hugggsssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tom, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks Noah; I thought no one would come and then suddenly in a flash you were there to brighten up the world . Thankyou very much . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
Amazing poem It's really warm & sweet Well done R x Rosie Mitchell |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks Rosie . L.of.L. Tom . XXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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