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Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

0 posted 2002-11-29 04:20 AM

YOU

You come to me with dreams
I add them to my future
for you are everything I need
you are my want

come lay with me in dark times
come sing for me your lullaby
hold my head down upon your shoulder

make love to me when silent surrounds us
entwine your fingers with mine and make us one
seek your passion and passion you shall find

I give to you myself, my trust, my time
receive from you... your touch
that calms my aching needs

you are more than a lost child in a man’s body
you are a friend , a lover , a silent partner
I hold my hand out to reach for you

times I am away
I think of you

You are my want

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2002-11-29 08:24 AM

Very passionate love portrayed in this poem...well written..

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-11-29 10:18 AM

So well written. I like this a great deal and "you are my want" just about says it all. Super line.

Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-11-29 10:32 AM

Salty
Now that is a Salty write, enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-11-29 11:01 AM

Shimmering

ThisDiamond

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-11-29 11:05 AM

Salty, this is a very good write, with lots of feelings and emotions. I think I'll send a copy to
Gary, if it's okay. Thank you for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

6 posted 2002-11-29 01:43 PM

Thank you all so much for your sweet words ...it means a great deal to me.

....And I would be honored garysgirl...for you to send this to him.

Thank you,
Salty

quote:
In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chopra

[This message has been edited by Salty (11-29-2002 01:44 PM).]

MAF
Junior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 15

7 posted 2002-11-29 06:02 PM

You make this hard for anyone to pass up Salty. I really enjoyed this read tremedously.
MAF

MAF
Junior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 15

8 posted 2003-01-14 01:24 AM

I found you again..."YOU"

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