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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-12-02 10:36 AM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#98"

Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON


you

the subject
of hours

once

a seemless
dream

before

the detail
of my noticing


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2002-12-02 11:20 AM




....and then what happened?

Like this a great deal!

You write these so well.

Warmest regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-12-02 11:22 AM


MARK,
Makes sense to me, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2002-12-02 11:27 AM




(smiles) And while we are on the subject, might I add this is a precious gem! (big hugggsssss) You always paint with such detail, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
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4 posted 2002-12-02 11:32 AM


Unorthodox style I really like it and the subject matter well...what's you get past the images you create for people you love, friends, family or idols. All that's left is those details that do us in.

As Above so Below? A Hermetic? Cinema paradiso? A film buff?

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5 posted 2002-12-02 12:29 PM


And...just what did you notice?
May we have more pleaseee?
Excellent as always Mark!
~Hugs~

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6 posted 2002-12-02 12:44 PM


Mark, I love this. I find myself looking for the next one.
BTW, thank you for giving me the idea of writing my little
Japanese verses, (haiku or senryu's), in sequence.
I'm really enjoying doing them that way. Besides, I'm also
learning something, I hope.
Thanks, Mark.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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7 posted 2002-12-02 03:49 PM


YOU

once silent
suspended tempo

illusive switch

turned on

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-02-2002 03:50 PM).]

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2002-12-02 05:03 PM


Pat, I'm glad you're enjoying.  What happened then?  When the dots were connected, the picture changed...

Sy, you have the advantage of insight inside out.

Noah:  just another facet...

Aenimal:  I never cared much for the Orthodox...  Hermet?  No -- just a seeker on a sojourn.  Film buff?  Let's just say a hopeless romantic...  As for details, I always believed that it's all about the details -- the big picture always takes care of itself...  Thanks for your thoughts.

Nancy, I noticed that the Truth always finds a way to surface...  (Stay tuned for tomorrow's "episode" -- same forum;  same website.)

Pat, I am honored.  The day we stop learning is the day we cease to "be".  Thank you for your fellowship.

Kacy:  

A switch
in tempo
IS
my turn
on
and on


-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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