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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-12-02 08:45 AM

Cinquains
~For An Almost Winter's Day~

To Love
To warm your heart
To say the words with touch
To know that every feeling is
Special

Special
Hearts, one to one
Beat each others rhythm
Lifeline needing, constant feeding
To Share

To Share
The Hushing sounds
Of silent offerings
Gifting in tenderness, to each,
Their Love

Their Love
Affectionate
Never wavers in cold
Seeks the flame of passion, to light
Each Night

Each Night
In arms, beheld
A richness, one embraced
Just a glimpse, an eternity
To Be

To Be
Ever closer
One step at a time holds
The promises of Tomorrow
To Love

Always,
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-12-02 12:49 PM

WynterGal~
You just abound with talent !!

LOVE the inter-weaving of these too~

Lifting a cup of hot chocolate to warmer days ....
and WARMER nights~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-02 01:23 PM

I wish that I could think and feel this way again...maybe some time in the future.

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

3 posted 2002-12-02 01:25 PM

very nice poem

i love the 'circular'structure of it

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-12-02 02:17 PM

These are really, really good! Love the way one leads into another.

Hugs, Marti

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-12-02 03:28 PM

Back to the beginning to walk the path and make new discoveries. You have a wonderful way of doing these.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-12-02 03:47 PM

Well, Maureen...just how beautiful you can write really is
amazing. You have so many wonderful thoughts to put in
poetry. You are a really special person, lady.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-12-02 05:03 PM

Marge..I really love cinquains...almost as much as I love Mark V Sheldons less thans

and is it ever cold here today..I think there is snow in the air *s

hugging you back
M

Dixie...it took me ages to even fantasize again..heck, what do I mean, I never fantasized for all those married years, stupid me

You will be able to eventually.
hugsss
M

zenny, thank you. Yes I think on another forum several of us sort of invented doing them in a connected way, sort of a Cinquain Round.

M

Marti, thanks it's sort of like Mark V's less thans connected.

Kethry, they are really fun...just count the syllables 2,4,6 8,2 and then repeat the last words at the beginning of the next grouping.
hugs
M

Ethel, I have thoughts that never stop coming for the last 4 years...not so sure it is all that healthy

Thank you for your kind words.
hugss
M

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2002-12-02 06:35 PM

Wow! I like the way you did this.

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