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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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This time last year I hid myself behind the walls of forced self sufficiency and would allow no one to view the healing process. I was mended; yet the cracks from my existence still threatened to rise up and overwhelm me This time last year I promised myself - Next year will be different, no more will I dwell behind the walls of depression; for life is too short to curtail it with drugs alcohol or other forms of destructive behaviour This time last year I began to tear down the shelter of my protective walls that had enclosed me in a womblike, tomblike existence and I began to laugh. At first at silly things but as my confidence grew and my faith blossomed, my courage to try was renewed This time last year I willed to try - no matter what the cost I decided to step out and rise or fall by those steps but also to not give up, give in or surrender to the faltering of them. I determined not to allow the darknss to consume me or even nibble at the edges of me. This time last year I wrestled the darkness and won. I accepted myself with all my flaws and failings but also with all my redeeming qualities and my strengths. And I have discovered resilience I did not know I had This time last year I resolved to live. And this time next year I resolve to pursue my dreams. Perhaps I will fail but at least I will have tried. - By this time next year. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (12-02-2002 03:05 PM).] |
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Smoothy Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 119The dark side of the moon |
I loved the overall scheme. Overcoming one's drawbacks, flaws, and fears to pursue the life they deserve. Wonderful, inspirational piece. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
very nice, Have been that person over coming those difficulties take great courage and self belief to make it, Thanks for sharing  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This time last year I wrestled the darkness and won. I accepted myself with all my flaws and failings but also with all my redeeming qualities and my strengths. And I have discovered resilience I did not know I had This time last year I resolved to live. And this time next year I resolve to pursue my dreams. Perhaps I will fail but at least I will have tried. - By this time next year. ================================ Keth-girlie......... yes...I know....and yes....you know.  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, Kethry, and time is the key to it all. I love this poem. You've expressed a healing process and subsequent renewel perfectly. May we all be as successful as depicted in your poem. So insightful and hope- filled for those who have not reached this plateau... Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and she grows.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Nothing could be clearer, wonderful write. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ironically enough kethry I've been on this same path, I've won some battles and lost some. But these words inspire me to try harder this year. Thanks |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am right there with you Keth..so true. And you WILL succeed. hugssss M |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Really beautiful poem *goes and reads it again The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I have recently went through the very same thing. THis time this past July I too cleansed drugs and depression from my body. Your words really hit home with me..and you said it all perfectly. *hugs* ~Salty |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
An excellent write and VERY inspirational. Thanks! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Keth, my friend, you did a marvellous job already climbing out of the dark and I saw your smile in September and I loved it. Special hug to you dear Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Yay!!! Oh Kethry, we are all soooooooo proud of you, sweet friend, and know if you set your heart to anything you can make a resolution anyday and New Years can be any day you want it to be! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not only did you resolve to do, Kethry...you dood it!! Anyone can make plans or resolutions...keeping them is the kicker. From what I see from here - and from standing in front of you - is worthy of loud applause.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
you done good Lynne! Well Done. thanks for sharing dear  Maree |
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