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Alpha_Omega
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0 posted 2002-12-01 04:03 AM



Mark, the legions that make you strong
Draw, me into that reality
That world you call your own
And find, the seasons of hypocrisy
Hold the little feelings of anguish
Too long they grow strong

Know that where you take me
Know that where I lye
The feathers in the sunrise
Will rise into a poem
As foe’s and fame
Gaze into your hypocrisy

Mortals drown in this reality
Only to strengthen you
And find the voice in the shadows
Just to deliver the angel wings
In my innocence
Inside you, inside me

Pour into me
Deliver the Angel Wings


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-12-01 04:12 AM


beautiful...sort of mystical...like it!
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-01 08:55 AM


Love your pseudonym! Encompasses everything, does it not!
Enjoyed your poem. Appreciated it even more the second time I read it!
Ethereal, haunting, appealing...

Earth Angel

whiskey
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3 posted 2002-12-01 09:11 AM


Very nice, I liked it alot, Mystical is the word, beautiful writing  

[This message has been edited by whiskey (12-01-2002 09:14 AM).]

Alpha_Omega
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4 posted 2002-12-01 03:55 PM


Thankyou, could I ask you people what was your interpretation of it?
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-01 07:54 PM




(smiles) Here you go, here's my latest shipment of angel hugs just for you! (big hugggssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, believe you can fly and the wings will be spread and you will soar, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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