Soft Whisperings......(# 12 of verses)

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garysgirl

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0 posted 2002-12-01 02:09 AM

Across blue waters
the wind gently is blowing
with soft whisperings

Earth Angel
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1 posted 2002-12-01 02:17 AM

Ethel, you just blew me across the water with this whispering haiku! Gosh darn it! You really are getting very good at writing these! I find this one especially appealing!

~ May the winds blow gently and carry you into the arms of your beloved

Linda

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-12-01 09:03 AM

Rippling waters
whitecaps frothing over blue
gull dips into brew

garysgirl

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3 posted 2002-12-01 09:35 AM

Linda, thank you for the sweet reply.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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4 posted 2002-12-01 09:38 AM

Karilea, thank you for the response in verse. I really like that.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

regards2you
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5 posted 2002-12-01 11:42 AM

Ethel,

I can hear this with my mind. It touches my senses.

Considering how little experience and time you've spent doing this it is top notch, right up there, or better, than those who've been writing these for decades.

I am so happy that you continue to expand and excell. It is fun watching you natural talent coming out. You get top billing from me.... Hugs to you!

Warmest regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

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6 posted 2002-12-01 11:45 AM

Thank you, Pat.

I really do appreciate your responses. I know that you
write what you really feel. Again, thank you, friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sandpiper
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7 posted 2002-12-01 11:50 AM

shhhhhhhhh...'tis a beautiful sound!

kayjay
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8 posted 2002-12-01 12:01 PM

Communicated
in effervescently styleish
perspicuity

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Mistletoe Angel

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9 posted 2002-12-01 02:00 PM

Santa Ana croons
Illustrious lullabye
Spirits swoon to it

(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I got a beautiful spiritual feeling reading this and thought of the warm Santa Ana winds! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-01-2002 02:01 PM).]

garysgirl

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10 posted 2002-12-01 02:46 PM

Yes, Sandpiper, listen to the beautiful whispers.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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11 posted 2002-12-01 02:51 PM

kayjay, thank you for reading and your reply. I appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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12 posted 2002-12-01 02:53 PM

Noah, I'm glad that you felt this as you read it.
That makes me feel good. Thank you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

BloomingRose
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13 posted 2002-12-02 06:24 AM

I like this. It's gentle with subtle meaning.
Excellent!

Deb

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14 posted 2002-12-02 07:15 AM

The moon glistens
Over water still
Listen for the secrets
Held within breeze

garysgirl

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15 posted 2002-12-02 12:29 PM

Deb, thank you very much, sweet friend. I appreciate it.

Julie, thanks for the verse. I love it when people reply
with a poem. Thank you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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