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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-11-30 07:16 PM


Evening Thoughts

I press the warmth, vanilla swirls
scented clouds surround me, yield
as I escape into a realm
of floating words, my thoughts unsealed.

Like bubbles softly giving rise
suspending me in your embrace,
I press the warmth, vanilla swirls
then close my eyes to see your face.

I take this path, each night absorbed
your prints upon me, marked as such
and warm the shivers of the dark
as waters press me, gentle touch

'Til I step out, and dry the thoughts
and wrap them up to take with me.
I press the warmth as dreams unfold,
embrace of you, in want to be.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-30-2002 07:18 PM).]

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Sandpiper
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1 posted 2002-11-30 07:19 PM


I am truly enjoying the sensual journey through your thoughts.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-30 07:21 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maureen, this is touching, sweet friend, always embrace these moments with the Downy softness and let the warmth fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

The Crimson Knight
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3 posted 2002-11-30 07:48 PM


Oh to be a big fluffy towel

You sensual babe of poetry

Dirk

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-11-30 08:57 PM


Sandpiper,  well I am glad you are following along

Noah, you always find a hallmark type response, you should probably go into advertising  *s

The Crimson ...what a response   I certainly didn't expect it...and I wasn't sure until now that you were the bishopofflames.
Thank you for the smile you gave me.
Maureen/Wynter

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-11-30 09:48 PM


You write such beautiful poetry.
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6 posted 2002-11-30 09:56 PM


I could feel this so well. I just loved it!

Never be normal!

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-11-30 10:01 PM


Thank you Sue
hugssss
M

And Liz..do you like taking bubble baths...in vanilla scented bubbles....that's what I do to warm my thoughts. Thank you.

M

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