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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2002-11-30 11:56 AM

                    of one


                    It is the near silence of you
                    that I miss the most
                    in the distant loneliness we share
                         Because I can not feel your
                         radiance
                         I am grown cold and sullen
                    What am I to do
                    but imagine you in heave of sigh
                    as you glance my way in rhyme
                         I sit alone now and write these words
                         dreamt for a fleeting shadow
                         that I can not grasp
                    You are
                    yet you are not
                    and so my day ends as it began
                    in the near silence of one



                                        © 112902

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

1 posted 2002-11-30 12:08 PM

your call to someone so close....so far away.

I feel your emotional cry

Nice write

~Salty

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-11-30 12:11 PM

WOW Extremely powerful emotion embodied in this one.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-11-30 12:13 PM

I did not know
Alice's looking glass
was sitting on your desk...

Well done, Krawdad...

I am sure others will come by
and heave their heavy sigh

and say
IWIHWT....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-11-30 02:58 PM

*sigh*
In memory of Love's presence.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-11-30 05:32 PM

Krawdad
An essence on the move.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-30 05:35 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh E.J, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort out to you and hope this loneliness never invades you again! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-12-01 12:23 PM

Krawdad

This silence speaks to my heart.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-12-01 12:26 PM

enjoyed

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

9 posted 2002-12-01 12:28 PM

May joy invade your spirit and love inspire your heart.

Enjoyed and identified.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2002-12-01 12:38 PM

Well I just wanted to dive into this sea of blue and give you a great, big hug!

Beautifully expressed...

Earth Angel

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

11 posted 2002-12-01 07:30 PM

A sensual haunting--enjoyed!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-12-01 07:48 PM

Krawdad, I could hear your pain through the silence....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

13 posted 2002-12-03 12:43 PM

WOW! ... that was awesome.....

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge

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