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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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What is this you've done to me? Once I was your everything. What is this I let you do? Nothing left. No love for you. And we don't care enough to cry. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sad...I liked the ending..I almost wanted to rewrite it as we don't even care enough to try... M |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno what lady? I saw one reply and KNEW it was you...  it's like veterans of war.... glad you got your papers to finally go home. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 well I was just about to go to the mall and see what I can see and possibly treat myself to something, since I HAVE been such a good girl this year...well at least I haven't been standing on a taverns parking lot getting myself barred from any more bars this year...  M |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YOU TOO? dang...seems like ole times... laughing gimme five..and hey, buy oils...egyptian musk...egyptian musk...egyptian musk... Happy Holidays Mo! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Harsh....final....exhausting. Understood. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Karen, this does sound very final. It has to be that way sometimes, doesn't it? ~Hugs~ "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Something to be said for knowing when the end is the end--and you said it quite well. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."And we don't even care enough to cry"--says it all. EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling Karen...I remember it well. Beyond the point of even crying about it. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, I too understand this feeling so well, sweet friend, I pray this feeling is not current as I send angel hugs of hope and comfort your way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
sounds like some people i know... sounds like you need a drink...or WE do... enjoyed the title too, serenity. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...but so true |
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