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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
Curling around the sing song of a flame is not a realistic heating resolution but I admire your poetic license and creative anatomy arrangements there are easier ways to say that but they are not to be said by me falling from the treetop while waving a white flag was not my idea of surrender either however it was either that or say that I was sorry and we both know how cold hell can get on a day life that perhaps I am draped kindly across the riverbed as coyotes howl at the misjustices that they inflict maybe they will pause momentarily and hear the ruffling of my wings lying dead on the earth remembrance is all that I crave from afar |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Curling around the sing song of a flame is not a realistic heating resolution but I admire your poetic license" Excellent write. "remembrance is all that I crave from afar" Stephen, sometimes that's the best space for remembering....from afar. Haunting those dark feather ruffling Venice alleyways again? [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-30-2002 03:45 AM).] |
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