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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
sketched from an unusual angle earlier in the show until I made a widower of myself with some passing comment about that particular piece of art It was probably a heavy burden to own me like the back of your hand and a pedicure pedigree I climbed over the fence and lived behind bars all in one evening all in one setting a seahorse is more often seen in death than in life, struggling with an image problem like that is something I can’t misconstrue like the 11nth hour plunge into the detox carry-out special or a martyr looking like you do cant be fooled by old fellows and recyclable bins left lying in the alley down on their sides or streaks of light playing off your features under the canvas moon Tomorrow will see the sun rise and scarves will unravel under the trickle of the wind showing that anything is possible |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ouch. Another reality byte, another dark snapshot, Stephen. Strolling along the boardwalk again? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely fantastic images and I actually felt I was right there seeing through your eyes, and that is good poetry. Well done indeed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Stephen, you are a very strong and powerful writer. You write with much feeling and emotions. This is the makings of very good poetry. Thank you for sharing your work. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
oopsy-daisy...I must have submitted twice. [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-30-2002 03:08 AM).] |
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