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Rhythm of Snow
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Rhythm of Snow |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Of human longing: to rhythms of snow 'But' you asked for a story with happy ending Your loneliness plays my tears I sat on the floor-- gazing at your lips: "Watch the light whisper to broken glass" to memories of you {softly lingering} In my dreams: trees are moving playing in rain between heaven & earth covering meadows in silk {let me sleep, let me dream, let me be with you} I rise to the edge of water it touches my hands-- draws me deeper in gold and green ripples if you could feel me the tense quiet surrounds you, in shadows where I have been -- where I am now The wood has settled, the press of leaves begins the ritual etched in autumn light-- Where the dove mourns-- begins again the dream no one can enter Deep inside the stillness ........I can hear you speak You're still an inspiration ........To me [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-29-2002 03:36 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
But I believe someone did enter....and stands in the shadow beside you... Lovely words Lauren, your delicate touch is nice to read... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, I think Magnus is right! Wonderful write and how nice to see you here. Miss ya' a lot.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite sweetie...love this. Therefore into my 'Lauren' folder it goes..  May we have more...pleeeease?! ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fully beautiful my friend. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Lauren, this is soooooooo gorgeous but yet feels so sad, I have missed your beautiful words so much and hope everything is alright! (kiss on cheek) I send bluebird happy hugs to you, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
*sighing* You write in the most lovely way. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Lauren, this is so beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful poetry with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
'your loneliness plays my tears' oh - that aches. very well penned, i LOVE this line... well, of course i like all of them, but as you once said in reverse: i am biased.  [This message has been edited by Christopher (11-30-2002 07:27 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you all....the days are short, much too short....I appreciate you all taking time to come by and reply... Lauren~ Deep inside the stillness |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This one bears repeating. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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