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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-11-29 12:43 PM

Day Long Hands

long and hard
came the reflections
in-between

the up and down
of the day

soft and smooth
should have been
the flow
of loving thoughts

but
short and swift
were the moments

interludes of time

breathless

left her breathless
they came too fast
left too quick
myriad thoughts and
pain

pain hurts

absent from body
but renders the
mind useless

never seen
but words touched
then the heart
broke

pain hurts

what does
care
look like

feel like?

I would put a
stamp on care
and send it direct

bypassing hands

straight to your heart

if it would
take the
pain
away
from you

if I could

I would…

long and hard
this day has been
long and hard
and difficult of dream

distant on the
wind of keen
I heard long the
scream of scoria
~ suffering ~
seeking out the
next victim

and I went
to see, to hear,
to hold,
to quietly listen,

and all that
could be offered
was a
helping hand

01.10.01

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-11-29 12:57 PM

"what does
care
look like

feel like?"

I think you'll know if you go look into the mirror.

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-11-29 01:41 PM

Karilea

"I would put a
stamp on care
and send it direct

bypassing hands

straight to your heart"

I think that you do this many more times than you realize, for you have touched me this way.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-11-29 01:54 PM

"what does
care
look like

feel like?

I would put a
stamp on care
and send it direct

bypassing hands

straight to your heart"
---------------------------------------------
You m'dear know 'care' personally...
and at times it does come with a stamp on it.

'Care' at times even tastes like chocolate!
~Hugs YOU~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-11-29 02:11 PM

One caring hand from you could do the healing of a thousand others...

EA

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-11-29 02:34 PM

Awesome...and yes...I would like to know what care looks like....IF you find out,
please share...

ptwils165
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 50

6 posted 2002-11-29 02:52 PM

very nice stuff here. enjoyed this a lot.

pete.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-11-29 03:34 PM

Karilea, as the others said, I do believe that you know what "care looks like". Thank you for the times you've cared about the feelings of others that I have witnessed here. You are always very caring and helpful with your poetry and your replies. Thank you for being you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2002-11-29 03:43 PM

this is tenderly amazing....

hugssssss sunny lady

Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

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