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Vampira |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Vampira perches, my heart lurches to see her grinning so. With saccharine smile, she gloats the while I tremble to and fro. My pulse she seeketh, I feel weaketh, why did I come this way? My heart went thud when I gave blood at the donor center today. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bless you for giving the gift of life--your blood! This was a fun read! Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good to see you here Ken! Cute write...but I can't give blood as I should.. I would pass out cold!  *Okay...call me chicken little* A timely reminder with the holidays now upon us. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
he he! enjoyed! lots of love gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, when I was little I used to feel the same way, now I love to give blood as I have O Blood so I can give to anyone and I wish to help so many children who need this extra blood more than I do! (big huggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-29-2002 01:45 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A wonderful write, a wonderful way to share Life. Happy Thanks Giving! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The last line was a fun twist to the implied imagery... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, my sentiments exactly. I faint at the sight of medicinal needles. But only because they broke one off in my arm once when I was a wee thing. Haven't quite gotten over the experience. But I hold in high regard those who find it within themselves to give blood. Thank you ! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-29-2002 02:02 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Egad! I almost passed out 'warm' reading Karilea's reply!!  Came back to pop this into my library.. now I have to go lie down or put my head between my knees for a few minutes. Anyone got any smelling salts?... think I may swoon.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Could this be why my heart goes thud too? Like this, cute and very well written.. excellent rhyme and cadence.. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To all: Thank you for the warmth and fellowship of your comments. I guess I've been stuck so many times, I've gotten over the needle heebie jeebies. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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