Open Poetry #23 |
47 candles |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
history repeating in a midnight design, intricate patterns as stars realign, daytime complexities become nighttime bliss, the child looking upwards seeking comfort in the abyss, sweetly intoxicating, the connect- the- dots heaven, wishing on starlight the silly girl blows out 47 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
47 is not such a bad number... ( or so I keep telling myself) liked the verse... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
47 is beautiful,hot and blonde one day you may see who i am |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling)... I'm sure it is... for me 47 is bald and tired ( laughing) We'd all like to see who you are... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
47 was four minutes ago... I do hope you had a very good birthday... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Happy Birthday, silly girl. Ed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love how the stars helped you celebrate. Enjoyed the realignments. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Not so silly, some of us are on the other side of the half-century mark...and the family wants to save on the candles..hehe |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
47 is still young in my opinion. Whether you are or not..and whether this poem is or isn't about you is another thing though. Doesn't matter. I still liked the poem. I love the "connect the dot heaven" line. It makes me wish it were my own creation. |
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MidnightSkyeBlue Junior Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 14 |
age is just a number enjoyed..connect the dots..pure genius.. |
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