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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2002-11-29 10:57 AM




history repeating
in a midnight design,
intricate patterns
as stars realign,
daytime complexities
become nighttime bliss,
the child looking upwards
seeking comfort in the abyss,
sweetly intoxicating,
the connect- the- dots
heaven,
wishing on starlight
the silly girl blows out 47

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-11-29 10:58 AM


47 is not such a bad number... ( or so I keep telling myself)

liked the verse...

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2002-11-29 11:00 AM


47 is beautiful,hot and blonde
one day you may see who i am

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-11-29 11:09 AM


(smiling)... I'm sure it is...
for me 47 is bald and tired ( laughing)

We'd all like to see who you are...

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-11-29 11:21 AM


47 was four minutes ago...

I do hope you had a very good birthday...

wranx
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5 posted 2002-11-29 11:25 AM


Happy Birthday, silly girl.

Ed

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Gaia
6 posted 2002-11-29 11:44 AM



I love how the stars helped you celebrate. Enjoyed the realignments.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-11-29 11:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
ecrivan
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8 posted 2002-11-29 11:49 PM


Not so silly, some of us are on the other side of the half-century mark...and the family wants to save on the candles..hehe


She
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9 posted 2002-11-30 12:07 PM


47 is still young in my opinion. Whether you are or not..and whether this poem is or isn't about you is another thing though.

Doesn't matter. I still liked the poem.

I love the "connect the dot heaven" line. It makes me wish it were my own creation.


MidnightSkyeBlue
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10 posted 2002-11-30 12:13 PM


age is just a number enjoyed..connect the dots..pure genius..
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