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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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charmed by a rainbow, elusively beautiful, as you paint thru the complacency of my sleeping heart, come and go, dazzle me, sprinkle some colors my way, inevitably fading behind the veil of the sky, i wait to be awakened again by tonights sunset |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
what a lovely way to wake--enjoyed! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I liked it alot, I love your style of writing it flows well in my mind when reading thanks for sharing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Pretty color, pretty picture. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Even Mother Nature likes to leave us hanging, giving us hope and desire to face another day. Well painted and lived. (and in response to your reply to Whiskey's recent post .... some of us do.) |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very nice; I enjoyed this a great deal. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
God's creation can certainly awaken our senses, can't it! Nice poem of your view. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for the nice comments...... ctowen: yes, i know .............just talking out loud, sort of |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"sprinkle some colors my way" ...great write! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
breathtaking and beautiful thanks inked |
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