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What Lies in the Mirror
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What Lies in the Mirror |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
it is your beauty it denies when you let yourself be deceived by the mirror's veil of disguise that, only you, ever believed but how you're viewed through other's lives will tell how you really appear not the myth the mirror contrives that's built on your self-doubt and fear deceptions in your mirror's lies can not alter what I have seen like your reflection, that my eyes finds beautiful beyond my dreams when your mirror shows otherwise changing the image you perceive just remember, the mirror lies but my vision you can believe. Jason Daniels (indulging a whim) Practiced in the Art of Perception... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice, Jason! I love the ABAB rhyme scheme, good subject too. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Now this is really a good concept! Very well written too! I liked this poem! Thanks for sharing! God Bless! |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Wow, I have to agree with the above....nice concept... Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks, from one who too often listens to the mirror. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, just because it is a vision doesn't mean what you feel is fake! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so wonderfully wise, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 What a wonderful mirror view you gift to us. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-29-2002 12:54 PM).] |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
I think you should indulge your whims a little more. Hmm..what I get from this.  When the mirror fails, you can be trusted because you can see clearly? I know there is more. I just wouldn't want to give it all away.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, I'm certainly glad that you "indulged a whim", here. This is really beautiful. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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MidnightSkyeBlue Junior Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 14 |
have I not read this before!? deja vu..lovely nonetheless.. |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
very nice written! i luved it |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
very nice written! i luved it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jason The mirror sees what ever you believe, enjoyed. |
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