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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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I woke up with a dry mouth from too many cigarettes and way too many drinks I stood but the room span So I sat down to figure out if it was clockwise or counter So I could synchronise an orbit towards the bathroom and vomit the stale remains of yet another night I'd never remember |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Again my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I can understand the angst and frustration of moments like that and I'm glad that didn't detract you from the wonderful talented artist you are now, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Been there done that unfortunately. Enjoyed this Aenimal.. and this...So I sat down to figure out if it was clockwise or counter If ever I'm feeling like that again, I will pay closer attention, clockwise or counter? hmmm. Hopefully I won't have to, find out that is. Maree  [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (11-27-2002 11:41 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
* Thanks Noah as always for his boundless support and enthusiasm. * Thanks for the encouragment Maree, Clockwise or counter refers to the way the room is spinning if that's what you were asking. Perhaps it's not as clear as it could be but sometimes my writings get sloppy. Raph [This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-28-2002 12:30 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well you know what you gotta do, thats a start............ peace to you feel the floyd |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Aenimal, It's counter clockwise in Australia, unless you're all turned around and then it doesn't matter. Sorry, didn't mean to flush your poem - which was very effective and visual I might say. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal You need someone to hold your head, good write. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
honest description... and quite well done.. Enjoy the talent... but hate waking up as you describe... still Sy is right... you need someone to hold your head.. and perhaps remind you that you aren't alone. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You vividly brought back a night I once had and care not to ever repeat! I hadn't eaten a thing all day and then popped into 3 parties--I was sick for 2 days! YUK!!! You wrote what I refer to as the 3 R's--a real raw write! Well done!---Almost too well done--my stomach is starting to flip flop as I recall my own night with demon rum! hehe Earth Angel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you for the support and kind words everyone. You're right someone to hold my head or hand is sorely needed. Raph |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Aenimal, yes I understood what you meant about clockwise and counter clockwise... I was just stating that I had not payed attention (in the past) to which way the room was spinning heheheh |
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