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The Depth of Aqua
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The Depth of Aqua |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
That's it? I'm to eat my own heart out? ~No chance~? You take no time to talk. That's it. You quit! That's your fix, you're going to walk? What then, would you think I am missing? For, if I want shallow, I'll go to the other end of the pool. Where it is not quite green, and, it is not quite blue. Oh, now I SEE with eyes the same hue, it's designed to float the fear in you. Maybe that's true, but, it simply won't do. The major difference between we two? Several points of I.Q. For, I remain: ~stupid-in-love~ with you! . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pat I know that love is not always easy and sometimes downright hard, but the humor in your voice here, made the chaos deep, ripple to unclear. Happy Thanksgiving. Thank you for being such a supportive friend!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Patricia, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, sometimers love can be so addictive and we know we have to let it go yet sacrifice is such a difficult ordeal to endeavor! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs of strength your way to follow your heart and find what makes you happiest, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-27-2002 11:38 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sounds from the deeper end of the pool are heartfelt. ThisDiamond |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Marti, Thanks for replying. I understand about the humor in this. You are right in that it is light-hearted in part, because she knows she will win him over. Because she understands the fear for/in him...Just because he said it is over, doesn't mean it is when fear is involved..it is not like there is another woman, or fatal disease, or..? he is afraid of commitment???? She has an expectation perhaps based on her own love for him and confidence in the love they have and knows how deep he really is?? And, I think at this point of the game she wouldn't admit to being hopelessly in love with him...(unless she was stupid, a word I rarely use) smiling. maybe love him, but, not in love with him....she is simply smitten with love and she is not giving up that easily... I rarely write about myself, or current events, but...sometimes I do...please don't be concerned. Thanks for responding. I hold you in my heart and prayers and hope things are going ok for you...  Happy Thanksgiving to you as well. Noah, Please don't take this to heart. Thanks for the blessing. Happy holidays. Am still trying different ways of writing poetry... feedback helps lots....like Marty's....I can think of how she saw it.... ThisDiamond, thanks for responding. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (11-28-2002 01:03 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I know that you rarely write about yourself, so I wasn't too concerned about you when I read your poem.  I really liked your different form that you used. I thought it was very good. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. I hope that you have a very happy Thanksgiving.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thank you Ethel...I just finished making the 6th loaf of Stromboli (Stuffed Italian Bread) Happy Thanksgiving to you. Got your 2 e-mails, but I'm so backed up on them from personal friends, a group I belong to, and others, I'll have to take couple hrs. or so to sort thr. Thanks for thinking of me, re:them.. Also glad you liked this poem. So nice of you to reply Hugs to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling here... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
I'm with PS...*smiling*..enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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