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Look at me. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Why do you leave me then forget me? Am I just a glow, a gentle being Is there meaning in me that matters Look at me, you'll see reality If you sit near me do you really care? Am I simply someone you pity Is there freedom in words I express Look at me, I am real Do I need to question my existence? Am I just a poet running out of ink Is there hope in me to keep living Look at me, I am me, and I am scared Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
[[ Am I just a poet running out of ink ]] This line stands out in my mind ..... I liked the poem but I loved this one wonderful line. ... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent. [This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (11-27-2002 06:10 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very poignant write that leaves the reader aching inside. Very well written Daniel. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
You conveyed the pain which humans feel when being ignored very well. Thanks for sharing. God bless! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw  it will be ok...this breaks my heart |
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