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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-11-27 03:33 PM

My laughter decieves me,
happiness sprung,
I'm crying to hold you,
in my thoughts a little longer.

Spirited motivation,
Living for you,
Mapping a future,
I cry of my devotion,
My devotion to you.

Elated abundance,
Of joyfully shed tears,
You are no question,
much further than near.

Tightly wrapped heartache,
Butterflies entwine,
My mystery malardy,
no doctor can define.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (11-27-2002 03:36 PM).]

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

1 posted 2002-11-27 08:46 PM

Nice!

BTE
Did you intend to write "malardy" or is it a typo?

[This message has been edited by Radrook (11-27-2002 08:47 PM).]

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2002-11-27 09:01 PM

Well done "butterflies entwine"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-11-27 11:49 PM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-11-30 03:58 AM

yes, beautiful.

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

5 posted 2002-11-30 07:04 AM

This is great..
I really love it.

Hugesss
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-11-30 09:50 AM

Gemma, this is a really beautiful and
well-written poem. Thank you for sharing
your thoughts and feelings with us.

~Hugs to you~

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-11-30 09:58 AM

..."Tightly wrapped heartache"--I could really feel that! Well done!

EA

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2002-11-30 10:06 AM

To each of you, a huge thankyou for your replies. its so wonderful to be able to share with such amazingly warm hearted people as you, the joy and sadness in happy tears.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2002-11-30 10:28 AM

Many new members join each day, but few are as talented and dedicated as you.I enjoyed this poem very much.

Never be normal!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

10 posted 2002-11-30 10:38 AM

Gemma,

This is precious. Love is no mystery here, for you've woven it throughout.

I especially like the phrases:

"tightly wrapped heartache"

and.....

"butterflies entwined"

I enjoyed this a great deal and look forward to more of your poetry.

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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