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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-11-27 02:43 PM



Love wandereed in times past,
Waiting for future,
to come and tap it on the shoulder,
Like passing of time can do.

Kiss listened,
to every single word it had heard,
A hazy sweet and warming sensation,
That no other lip could meet.

Respect had a vision,
A repetoire of dreams,
until now they had been,
So life began and so did reality.

Passion had an instinct,
With nothing to pursue,
Until Touch caressed passion
with boundless wings.


learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-11-27 04:37 PM


A lovely write.  Thank you for sharing it with us.
Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

2 posted 2002-11-28 02:58 AM


Personification par excellence!
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