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A2J
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since 2002-11-22
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0 posted 2002-11-26 05:00 AM



Untitled

I feel... I've been letting You down,
I have been disapointing You.
It's like she told me:
"Look at yourself,
you are leading a double life."
So maybe what she said is tue
Because I have accepted You
But I never let go of the world.
Please forgive my selfishness, Lord
Because I stand infront of You today
Ready to give my all,
Ready to put on the shoes of willingness
And start to walk Your way.

© Copyright 2002 Deidrè - All Rights Reserved
Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

1 posted 2002-11-26 01:06 PM


Nice!
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-11-26 07:37 PM


Ready to put on the shoes of willingness
And start to walk Your way.

It's all He asks. Nicely done.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2002-11-26 09:22 PM



A2J,

It is hard to let go the world we live in. So many temptations. But, you are so right, for willingness, no matter the times failed (and learned), is one of the keys to getting back on the right path.  He'll forgive us, not because we asked, but because that is the nature and the grace of Him..

Hugs and warm regards to you,
Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Radrook
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4 posted 2002-11-28 02:56 AM


Total dedication is the thing!
Good show!

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