Open Poetry #23 |
The Simple Truth |
joedreamer New Member
since 2002-10-16
Posts 3 |
I just want to know what you guys think...the submissions havent been up so I came here. Its a very personal poem that took a long time to get down on paper. The Simple Truth I wish that it is easy to say you're no longer in my heart I wish that I am happy cause now I can freshly start To go for other people To go out and just explore But no matter what I try to do You're still there like before So I make myself false promises You wont be there anymore Just drown "it" out with strangers and some other things in mind Try to forget the happy moments and the love you left behind But who is it that I'm fooling with these thought inside my head I cannot deny the simple truths my heart shows to me instead That only God can put this all away cause I can't do the job That I have to just accept this Fact... You're the only one I love |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joedreamer, Welcome to Passions. I hope you find this to be the Poet's home that you have been searching for! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) This is such a touching and heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I know how you feel for I have been feeling the exact same way lately because I love my sweetheart so much and am scared she may not love me anymore, my heart goes out to you and wishes for new love to find a way to your heart and always shine! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I like this love poem. Heartfelt. Enjoyed, and certainly can relate. Acceptance is the beginning of the end, and, of a new beginning. Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-16-2002 09:04 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome To Passions! Very heartfelt first post! I look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to this big happy family of kindred spirits! I'm sure as you read your poem, you realize that it was worth the effort you put into writing it! Welcome to the world stage of poetry---You are off to a great start! ~ smiles and angel hugs ~ Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Joedreamer, I think that your poem is very good, even though it's so sad. Love poems which are so heartfelt are my favorite kinds of poetry. WELCOME to Passions in Poetry. I'm sure that you will like it here, just as I have. I haven't even been here a month yet, and the folks here have made me feel like a part of there big "family of friends".I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing your heart. With Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Joedreamer, This is indeed a very sad poem, but a very good one as well. The best poems in my opinion are the hardest to write, cause they usually are so personal. Welcome to Passions. I hope you love it here as much as we all do. Dawn |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
It's hard to forget those that we love. I hope you find peace very soon. Welcome to PIP joedreamer. I hope you'll enjoy your stay here. ~Sheri |
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