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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-11-27 12:47 PM

In the silence they call to me
and I listen       intently
trying to hear the chants
upon the winds of  evermore
but they are not here,

where the sounds of civilization
race by
disturbing the tranquility
of a past,
when the mountains murmur
would hush in reverance
as the campfires glowed
and voices could be heard
telling sacred stories of old;
their heritage, in tradition told.

I gaze past the mountains of same
searching the darkness        for the light
to draw me near,         so I can hear.
Da dum, Da dum, the pounding
of the drums..............
accompanied only by the         distant howl
of a brethern spirit          in memories hold.

Here, in this place          I can hear........

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you 'hear' "me"?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-11-27 01:13 PM

(smiles) Yay, and always cherish these special memories close to your golden heart, sweet friend, you truly are a blessed friend to everyone, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-11-27 01:35 PM

Lovely Donna. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-11-27 01:39 PM

...BEAUTIFUL !!...

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2002-11-27 05:43 PM

Those are words of a real poet. I have been away for some time from Passions, and every now and again I do come by and this poem has reassured me of the greatness of this wonderful family of poets that reside here.
I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful and well-written poem. Thank you for sharing such beauty.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-11-27 07:28 PM

Noah, your a doll! Thank you.

Chris, thanks and hugs back to you.

*lil curtsies* Thanks much Nancy,
I appreciate that.

Daniel, it is good to see you again!
It has been awhile my friend.
Ahhh......thanks for those kind words,
that is very special to me. Thank you.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2002-11-27 07:29 PM

I love this one, it envelops you!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2002-11-27 07:45 PM

Eddie, you snuck in there on me. I am so glad that you stopped in and that you enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-11-29 11:05 PM

Enjoyed...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-11-29 11:16 PM

Donna, you are so good. I love your work and
this one is no exception.

Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful
poetry, sweet lady.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2002-11-30 01:09 PM

hey gang, I will try to get back in to respond to each individually soon. Sortah pressed for time today. Hugs and peace!

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

11 posted 2002-12-01 09:34 AM

                    where the sounds of civilization
                    race by
                    disturbing the tranquility
                    of a past,

Truth rings loudly in your words friend.  enjoyed this and definately keeping it.   *s*

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2002-12-01 09:55 AM

I too, have a special place where I go to "hear".

It is so apparent to me that you write from the well of your wisdom of the ages and your inner-knowing.

This is a timeless piece of poetry and well-deserving of being read, and 'heard' over and over....It now has a new home in my library, dear poet friend!

~ Congratulatory hugs for this little masterpiece

Linda

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2002-12-01 09:57 AM

nice

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2002-12-01 12:22 PM

GentleSpirit~
Indeed you are a gentle one~
This is just so softly beautiful~
The voice you give to your Native Indian pieces is so spiritually felt in this heart~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2002-12-01 12:47 PM

Donna

In order to hear you have to know how to listen...I can tell that you do.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2002-12-01 01:11 PM

Donna,
A lovely soft write, enjoyed.

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