Open Poetry #23 |
Pausing to Think |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pausing to Think of the green tree and the briar the ocean's rushing flavor the quiet pond and river's song the mountain climb I savor The voices distance still recalls the lives that touch my essence the fairy dust that round me twirls to magic smile of strangers of the grandmother who held my hand who made the lemonade and whistled bird songs to the sky with answer's serenade of the freckled lift of father who took me to the sea and drenched me in salt water’s swirl though gone he still holds me of mother tender hearted whose wisdom smiled me open to find the best in those around her spirit still helps coping of my precious little girl who twirled into my being a treasure held within her palm still open for my seeing the love of friends who understand and fold me in their comfort who see the beauty time has woven and tell me how they love it of time that marches with my sons now gown and filled with living who with their seasons blessed by love their own roads are beginning The loving touch of a good man the sound of music playing the poetry that speaks for me and ears that hear my praying of many blessings of the moon and sunsets touched with golden the lessons of days gone before that in my heart I’m holding For poetry and poet's dear who share their hearts so freely across all time and boarders water frindship's garden to greenly _______ a Thanksgiving repost |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
This is absolutley beautiful....as are the many things you are thankful for. Such a good rhythm and flow with this write. *Excellent* !! ~Salty |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Martie, this brought tears to my eyes because this is such a gorgeous friendship poem! (smiles) You are a very special friend to us all, sweet friend, God Bless You, I wish you and your whole family the most happiest Thanksgiving ever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Marty, This is so great. Everything that Salty said, plus have a great Thanksgiving, Marty... God Bless, Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
That was really good. im glad to see that u are thankful for so many things.. hopefully everybody it.. happy thanksgiving! RxyFxy04 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...the love of friends who understand and fold me in their comfort who see the beauty time has woven and tell me how they love it... Cause for Pause, surely.... holding you in warm hugs... Have a Happy Thanksgiving, Martie... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, this is so beautiful...just so "YOU". Thank you, sweet lady and HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO YOU AND YOURS "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
happy Thanksgiving Martie.. enjoy your holiday... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful Martie. Let us all count our blessings. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving sweet lady. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so lovely sweet Martie. May you and yours have a blessed Thanksgiving. ~Hugs & Luv~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful sentiments Martie. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Hugs. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It's good to stop and think for a while! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
thanks for this hymn of thanksgiving and for sharing wonderful memories - Paul |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Goodness, Martie, this is splendid and so lovingly written. Yet another for my library, dear friend. *hugs* The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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fairydustwing Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 17U.K., London |
I thought this was stunning. I'm new to the forum and it was one of the first poems I read here, your very talented. Best, fairydust x |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nope, I don't think you left anything out and we are all blessed with thanksgiving as well as a lady who gives her words... which say thank you so strongly in so many ways... |
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