Open Poetry #23 |
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The Grout of Doubt |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
The Grout of Doubt Asbestos dust flies my mind But not enough to make me blind Just enough to make me sick And just enough to make it stick Sinking deep into my dreams Canceling my future schemes Skimming off the sense of more Closing down my futures door. A chaos sickness in delay An illness made of repartee A dark that overcomes the sun With ne’er a path that one can run. I walk the crooked path of why That overcomes me with a sigh. For this infection carries strife That cuts the years and shortens life. It is the element of doubt A viral virus of a sprout |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
having the same problem myself today...and it is leaving a bad ring around the tub...just wish... it would go down the drain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady It is a common illness, almost like the common cold. LOL Have a good holiday. ![]() |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely done ![]() regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir Thank you for your time and read have a nice holiday. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, not only do I have the disease of "doubt" at times, but I also have asbestosis.......not a really bad case, but enough to make me have a lot of trouble with my lungs. You wrote words that could apply to both...and very well, I might add. I thank you for sharing your thoughts with us today. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you for your time and read and have a wonderful holiday. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Sadly doubt is a disease that spreads to us all and I wish we could all have the strength, the ability to dodge its glimpses and embrace the world with loves hope! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Asbestos dust flies my mind But not enough to make me blind Just enough to make me sick And just enough to make it stick =============================== A chaos sickness in delay An illness made of repartee ==================================== Could those lines be any cooler??? you even make doubts grout grooooovy *L* Sounds like I need to send Randy back...youre getting fussy with out him to keep you from getting bored LOL I'll send extra winkies back with him... smooches too ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Tough keeping that grout clean from the constant food of thought. Enjoyed |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Doubt has been my best teacher. ![]() Liked this much. Thank you. Warm regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, yes, the bottom line says it all, one little sprout given chance to grow...doubt can infestate all you know Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Yes doubt gets us all. JM, Got your last picture, beautiful. Still can't get that sound one. Hope you have the best of holidays Randy likes candy sweets if you make them. WWS ![]() ![]() ![]() RSWells You thought a mouth full, LOL. Pat, Glad you liked, have a good holiday. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
asbestos motes fly like rote silent clamor in shift and tote trading mindsets, agree in think what more to make our Randy wink? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Your right, have a nice holiday. Martie ![]() Sunshine And winkiewinkie to you. happy holiday ![]() |
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