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lace for wing |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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(rolling green of rolicking...) "tell me I am what I seem..." one brown ass is frolicking through the meadow tall... (ever tried?) it's such a lovely metaphor... chasing cornucopia behind a pair-- --of French doors sheers to cast a silhouette dancing behind veil. castanet-- a stomp of me all wrong. a gossamer, trust me? as I prance on bed, holding curtain as a cape above you singing you my song... gracefully this sheer across your face. I want to taste you-- your sweetness and feel the satin on my cheek-- while I bathe within your eyes... a serpent sighed. I learned to fly. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-27-2002 05:24 AM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity~ Enjoyed Do I detect a little happiness in this piece? How you do this I haven't a clue One thing for sure... nobody does it better than you...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-27-2002 04:54 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my we are frisky tonight aren't we?  enjoyed sweetie. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
let me drape it gracefully this sheer across your face. I want to taste you-- your sweetness and feel the satin on my cheek-- while I bathe within your eyes... "paneled lace" a serpent sighed. I took my cape. I learned to fly. even using lace for wing... ================================ moth anthems and mirrors.... you write it...I fly in your flame  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a softer journey.... very well done my friend..well done indeed... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity You could fly with ribbons or bells or nothing at all but tenacity held Loved this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I took my cape. I learned to fly. even using lace for wing.." (smiles) Oh Karen, this is soooooooo gorgeous, with your whimsical pursuit of your words you never even need gossamer to fly as the grace is all inside of you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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