Open Poetry #23 |
What Love May Mean |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
A question was asked now you had children was there a void where no answer would enter behind theatrical scenes in caravan costume parlours? people get romantic,even worship stars... the ones aglitter and those that sign autographs behind theatrical scenes on tour from coast to coast a question of love's still asked back stage microphone is passed picked to cue on an age old question. I mean the decision to love to effect romantic changes is to accept the evident diverse qualities laid bare they were there, but you never noticed now the children are grown and they will ask what love is when their Mom went into show biz and left little caring on the home front effective upbringing was a circus stunt. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-27-2002 09:24 AM).] |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Well written! Enjoyed! A career which interferes with loving our children is a family-destructive career. Unfortunately, some parents don't care. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing! God bless! Looking forward to reading more of your fine poetry. [This message has been edited by Radrook (11-27-2002 01:54 PM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
makes you want to shake someone sometime....make them realize exactly how thankful they should be. I suppose we all could use that from time to time..and your words did a little shaking Nice work! ~salty |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
some people need some shaking, yes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
First time I have read your thoughts on this subject. Clear and most disturbing...How sad to miss the fleeting glimpse of children, for they grow so fast...or of love in it's raw emotional state...the truest of gifts. Very well done. Happy Holidays to you. ThisDiamond |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Dear Diamond, Having a toe hold in that industry...it is a frequent occurance and while men and women continue to play...much of the trauma happens between mother and child as it is she who usually nutures...even in these 'postmodern' times...sad to say Martin. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-29-2002 10:22 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Some women are free and independent spirits who are not into hearth and home--and that in and of itself, is not a bad thing!--but if that lifestyle interfered with the well-being of her children, that would break my heart. Beautifully written EA |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Earth Angel, Correct, in itself it is not a bad thing..but the issue I brought forth here is not about the mother 'not being interested in hearth and home' the issue is abandoning her loved ones.Thanks for your input. Martin |
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