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Open Poetry #23
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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-11-26 12:13 PM



The Cobalt tattoo
that I once wore on my heart
has faded away

© Copyright 2002 E.F.Rose - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-11-26 12:17 PM


Faded away, or just tucked away into a corner?
Twinkling you in Peace.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-11-26 12:17 PM


wranx
Perhaps into another day.

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3 posted 2002-11-26 12:20 PM


ah... nice play here on color and on emotion...

short...and leaves one to look at the surface or deeper for more. Enjoyed...


Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2002-11-26 12:23 PM


A heart healed? I hope so.
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-11-26 11:40 PM


silent nod.
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
6 posted 2002-11-27 02:34 PM




yep, love hurts........
some cuts go deeper than others...........
sometimes the name in ink is permanently
etched on the heart, no escaping then

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7 posted 2002-11-27 02:51 PM


enjoyed this very much

Never be normal!

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