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My Cradle Ship
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My Cradle Ship |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Cradle Ship I asked the wind to blow today To task my cradle soft in sway To wing me through the ocean blue And bring me back to land I knew. She stays me long my mistress sea By touché and her bribery In swoons and little sprightly gusts In tunes that stir my manly lust With velvet nights and gem full skies She lured me with her gentle sighs. And brewed me in her revelry Till blue and green was all I see. She is a shrew when she is mad And brews the green to freighting bad With waging toss and lightening floss And raging seas of chaos force This ole of a sirens hand Stays me with her contraband. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
She stays me long my mistress sea ~*~ brine that sings the song of thee where the wails are salty, true, and the poet's chant is long in blue... [This message has been edited by Lady In White (11-26-2002 09:53 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sy..this reads like the gentle rocking of a cradle.. Beautiful morning read. ~Morning hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
She is a shrew when she is madShe sure is, and outside my window right now are some huge raging waves, oh such is Vancouver winter. Loved this Sir Seymour. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed the read very much this fine morning. Thanks for sharing with us, Mr. Seymour. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Such lovely thoughts you've shared~ *Huglets* and Happy Thanksgiving to you and Isabel~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - thankyou for this voyage of words. Well done!! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
These words from shore Let me sea more... Nicely penned. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you so much for your sunshine bright. Enchantress And morning hugs to you my dear. Sharon, Thank you love. garysgirl Thank you for being there. Marge, And a happy holiday to you and yours.  Chris, Thank you for the well done. MARK, Cleaver, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, I felt as though I was floating on the water reading this, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, may you always sail off into the horizons end to where the sun kisses the ocean, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Helms alee, Sy...hold that course after the tack..sail close to the wind...well written... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, That is a very sturdy cradle 'ship' you have. That Mistress Sea, certainly rocks your boat. Wishing you smooth sailing into the holiday...Happy Thanksgiving! I liked this poem for your words painted quite a picture to 'sea'.... Enjoyed it a great deal. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (11-26-2002 12:20 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Loved it is good enough for me. scorpio Thanks for the well written. Pat, Have a happy one too and thanks for the read and reply. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I asked the wind to blow today To task my cradle soft in sway To wing me through the ocean blue And bring me back to land I knew. She stays me long my mistress sea By touché and her bribery In swoons and little sprightly gusts In tunes that stir my manly lust With velvet nights and gem full skies She lured me with her gentle sighs. And brewed me in her revelry Till blue and green was all I see. ======================================= OH yeah....have i mentioned I have a thing for lusty sailors LOL  heheheand you already know I am loving this gem of pen...I too now know and crave the lure of the blue the moth is back from road tip number one... we head for Chi-town on Friday... Randy went to Columbus..he rode in the seat belt like a good little dragon *L* He wants to go to Chicago too. I told him he has to ask you...in case you wanted him for chips and beer ..all the good football games are on Turkey Day .. LOL  *ww*   [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (11-26-2002 02:30 PM).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Nice and soothing to read. Enjoyed! Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I see Randy has made himself right at home with you. His own chair and trips and God knows what else. I don't think he wants to come home even for the football. LOL Glad you are getting to go to all the places you wanted to see and thank you for thinking of me. By the way only one pictue came through in the email I could not recieve the other email. You seem to be having a good time on the beach. WWS since Randy is there. Deb, Glad you enjoyed. |
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