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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

0 posted 2002-11-25 08:45 PM

Whisk me away
on your
iron steed
Convince me
things will
be fine.
Be patient
if I seem
afraid,
Just smile
and tell me
you're mine.
Help me to
laugh again
with your
winning ways,
Evoke passion's
sparkle
back to
my eyes.
Your ardent love
for me
disregards the past,
and is
my misery's
certain demise.
  ~~~~~~~~
    ~~~~~~~
      ~~~~~~~~~~



                                   Chris Barker
                                    Nov. 2002
                                      ~~~~~~

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (11-25-2002 10:19 PM).]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-11-25 08:51 PM

This is beautifully written. I enjoyed it very much.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-11-25 08:53 PM

Galloping.....where was the turn-off to
the Gingerbread house? Hmmmmmmm.....

Chris...this certainly would be the demise..
YES... Written masterfully....

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-11-25 09:09 PM

SmartChick - thankyou so much.

Magnus - turn left at the Apple Tart Apartments...lol. Thankyou dear sir.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-11-25 10:51 PM

Ah sweet sister...
I'm sure he will do all these things and more!
~Hugs & Luv, Teed~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-11-25 10:54 PM

Looking for a knight on a white stallion, Chris?

Loved this, completely.

*hugs*

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-11-25 10:59 PM

Chris, I like this. I especially liked the
rhythm of it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-11-25 11:55 PM

(smiles) Oh Chris, I wish this joy so very much for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, your golden heart is so deserving of it, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-11-26 05:37 AM

Ah Chris may your misery always be in retreat sweet lady. Nicely done.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-11-26 09:42 AM

NancyLee - yes, he will !! Thankyou sister of mine. hugs to you

Michael - I think I've already found him...or he found me....

thankyou for reading and commenting.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2002-11-26 09:45 AM

Ethel - I am so glad you enjoyed.

Noah - you are just too kind - thanks.

Donna - Thankyou sweet lady for your caring response.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-11-27 11:45 PM

Really like this...James

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2002-11-28 09:28 AM

James - I am so glad you liked this little poem. Thankyou.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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