Silence (inspired by wranx's

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Open Poetry #23

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-25 08:28 PM

Silence

your
silent icicle
has pierced
my heart
evaporating
to nothingness
and me…
hollow
and bleeding

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-11-25 08:30 PM

Dang Helen!! You do these so well!!
Love it!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

2 posted 2002-11-25 08:40 PM

Helen~ All I can say is AWESOME!!!
Paul

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-11-25 09:09 PM

You honor me with this Helen, I'm happy to have inspired (but not caused) this piece.

Great!

Ed

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-11-25 09:24 PM

1slick_lady

your
silent icicle
has pierced
my heart
evaporating
to nothingness
leaving no weapon
of destroy

Forgive me your ending is just as good.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-11-25 09:27 PM

Well done. ThisDiamond

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2002-11-25 09:39 PM

Yep! Me bows to the Master of these...that you do so-o well.

jwesley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-12-26 03:48 AM

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