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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-11-25 08:48 AM





Your face lit up
as I paced my steps towards you,
wondering, if you remembered
that moment when...
and then you swept me up
into your arms,
an embrace missed,
but not forgotten...
and then we danced.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Constance
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1 posted 2002-11-25 09:01 AM


Just lovely! Drew me in immediately and left me to imaging what might have happened next.


Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2002-11-25 09:03 AM


And they danced

Step within steps
Arms within arms
Movement aligned
Mingling charms

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-11-25 10:03 AM


It's always what happens next that keeps me "dancing"

thank you
M

And they danced

Step within steps
Arms within arms
Movement aligned
Mingling charms

Memories slowed
in arms of dance
eyes into eyes
in sighs of romance

thank you
M

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4 posted 2002-11-25 01:11 PM




(smiles) Oh Maureen, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, and may the dance never end just as the gorgeous poetry and inspiration you have in your heart never stops flowing! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Realms of Light
5 posted 2002-11-25 01:16 PM



This left me smiling!

EA

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