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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-11-25 07:38 AM


From behind sheer curtains white
Soft the light
That mingles with dark of night,
Casting shadows on the wall
Soft the light
That allows vision at all
As I walk the grim alleyway
Soft the light
Shadows that beg me to stay
And watch movement in the light
From the night
Her form very pale and slight
Silhouetted in the night.

Gloom


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-11-25 08:10 AM


interesting write... captured the moment..and the thoughts...

I enjoyed

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2002-11-25 09:23 AM


The soft flow of words, and distinct visuals within these lines, left me with a very vivid image Professor. Very nicely written ... much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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3 posted 2002-11-25 09:25 AM



Ah Professor...stay with the light
if only for a little while...

sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25
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the winds of destiny
4 posted 2002-11-25 09:33 AM


Some time spent in the light brings brightness to all souls
no matter how dark things seem at time.  The shadows
only need visited now and then.

Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2002-11-25 11:17 AM


Thank you, Cpat Hair,
I am pleased you enjoyed.

Thank you, Kit McCallum,
That my words could let you visualize and enjoy
Pleases me

Thank you, Decaflame,
I tend toward the shadows
I tend toward the misting
Just to glance in windows
As I am slowly passing,
Moving on least this alley walker
Is mistaken for a evil stalker

Thank you, sigheyes,
Perhaps true for most
But the shadows are my home
And I am their host
Where I the party of only one.

Gloom

Zinsser
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Calif.
6 posted 2002-11-27 09:28 AM


Shadows that beg me to stay
And watch movement in the light
From the night
Her form very pale and slight
Silhouetted in the night.
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beautiful......................

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