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Gunslinger
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0 posted 2002-11-25 01:35 AM



I was sleeping in the front seat,
While Chris, my buddy, drove.
Heading for Wyoming,
The news forecasting snow.

My mind was in another world,
And I was riding high-
Set to win the Championship,
At the Big Show in the Sky.

I'd mark them out, my scores were high
As our rig rolled along.
The season drawing to a close,
And I was showing strong.

I had ten head, and them the best-
I dreamed along enthralled...
When Chris said, "It's your turn to drive-"
I'd finally rode them all.

I guess that's where the money is...
In a cowboy's dreams.
I never seem to have enough,
In these blue denim jeans.

So as I drive, my buddy dreams-
My part in life seems small,
Since my taste of glory,
The night I rode them all.

© Copyright 2002 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
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Ancient land called Chivalry
1 posted 2002-11-25 03:46 AM


Very Delightful.
Thanks for sharing.

Poetry is love and love is life.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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2 posted 2002-11-25 08:53 AM


I enjoyed this, John...

...believe what your heart feels...

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2002-11-25 09:48 AM


Excellent flow, and a wonderful tale Gunslinger. I always enjoy your writing, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-25 01:03 PM




(smiles) Oh John, I always enjoy your views and sentiments of the wild west, sweet friend, I too love horses so much, I just am bad at riding them! LOL! This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-25 01:08 PM


John, I love these cowboy stories of yours.
Are they about you and are you really a cowboy??
Either way, these poems are really fun to read.
I love them. Thanks for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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